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Anxious

Post by Paperclip420 » Fri Sep 05, 2014 3:13 pm

I'm ready for greatness, inexplicably anxious
Puffing strong, OG occupying the Swish
Everything in my way I'm ready to vanquish
Just hoping the world understands my language
Talking unintelligible
Trying to rush the inevitable
Knowing when I leave this world my name will be unforgettable
I'll prove it to all those still skeptical
My height right now is immeasurable
Star-gazer, High Flyer, absolutely incredible
The sights I see daily
Witnessing beauty burn underneath this shade tree
Praying for a little lady that's heaven sent
Striving for success, yeah I'm hell bent
Some call me a sinner but I have no reason to repent
Smiling as I enjoy my ascent
No time to deal with your discontent
Eyes focused forward, ambition occupies my mind
Addicted to the feeling of leaving it all behind
Making sure the stars above are aligned
For me to shine right beside them
Only that good good, not a seed nor a stem
Eyes are bloodshot, lungs are on fire
But I'll keep hitting and floating higher


Wrote to "Anxious" by Caskey.
"Not all those who wander are lost."

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Re: Anxious

Post by weedguru_animal » Sat Sep 06, 2014 9:36 am

I liked the flow of this one, paperclip...
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Re: Anxious

Post by Paperclip420 » Tue Sep 23, 2014 5:16 am

Thanks man. I've been trying to put some rhythm into these things and I feel I'm getting a little better with each one.

Also, just wanted to say thanks everybody for all the views. Stay Lifted XD
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