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doobieman420 · Post by **doobieman420** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 3:04 am

Wander aimlessly, unforgiving eternity
Fearing madness, grope in the darkness
Always alone, solitary confinement
Lost among men lacking refinement

Premonitiong filled with trepitadation
Lost my way on this expedition

Follow the light
Through
Fathomless night
Escape this hell so I
Can free my mind

The darkness fades, yet lost I remain,
World out of focus, go against the grain
Dreams of hope comfort me not
Dreams are only dreams, so I throw in my lot

Follow the light
Through
Fathomless night
Escape this hell so I
Can free my mind

Premonitiong filled with trepitadation
Lost my way on this expedition

I don't know myself, what can I say
This must be how I lost my way
Strength is only a charade, end the facade
I need somebody, I need to be saved

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Mysterious shaman guides me to the Land of Illusion
Mind and body undergo psychedelic fusion
What is right, what is wrong
What will come, what has gone
My eyes do not deceive, a gift to receive
Mythical visions, I do now believe
What can the past teach, what does the future hold
What have I lost, what do I behold
A force of life my mind conceives
Good or evil I cannot perceive
What will I do, what have I done
What has ended, what has begun
Although content in my eternal confusion
These queries have no answer, no solution

tell me what u guys think, i got tons more for later...

parrattg · Post by **parrattg** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 7:14 pm

Roll it. Poke it. Light it. Toke it.
Breathe together now.
Inhale. Hold it.
And three -- and two -- and one.
Exhale.
Control the coughing fellas!
Hold your tummies in.
OK, all together now...
Breathe deeply.
Inhale. Hold it.
And three -- and two -- and one.
Exhale. Control that coughing, Bob.
Big smiles. Be happy!
Release that tension.
Now you've done it!
You're stoned -- on the good shit.
OK, let's move on to the bucket.
Get your lighter ready..

By D. Rybucket

doobieman420 · Post by **doobieman420** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 9:02 pm

thats good, i was hoping for some feedback tho

Sm0kyMcPot · Post by **Sm0kyMcPot** » Fri Aug 03, 2007 7:59 am

doobie i feel the same way man...if i understood ur poem correctly, which of course i probably didn't ...i should probably read it a bit more before i post but i do indeed like it, the second one was pretty good too.

doobieman420 · Post by **doobieman420** » Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:23 pm

thanx. actually i like the first better too.

pkkupo · Post by **pkkupo** » Wed Aug 08, 2007 2:12 am

the first one was beautiful dude. very nice.

doobieman420 · Post by **doobieman420** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 4:13 am

Out of the silence a lone guitar sings
Chords of sadness stir you, listen to the strings
A song of pain and solitude
Without love or gratitude

The strings move you, feel it in your soul
You long to reach out, to embrace and console
The notes rise and fall like a troubled sea
The fingers that play speak of lost harmony

The song transforms like a changing wind
Breathing inspiration into all who listen
Guitar strings cry and scream
Of strength and power, all redeemed

Like a ray of sunshine the notes give light
Like a summer breeze the notes comfort and delight
Strings of beauty bring solace and harmony
Comforting sad souls, they agin feel loved and happy

waddya think?

BlazedAndConfused · Post by **BlazedAndConfused** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 4:17 pm

as a guitar player that means a lot
well once i figure it out it will

doobieman420 · Post by **doobieman420** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 9:18 pm

my bro plays guitar, i wrote it for him.

pkkupo · Post by **pkkupo** » Sun Aug 12, 2007 2:15 am

you're good dude. keep em coming.

doobieman420 · Post by **doobieman420** » Sun Aug 12, 2007 5:47 am

ill write a new one tomorrow. thanx for feedback guys.

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