Pouring My Heart

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Pouring My Heart

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I've been thinking a lot,
About pouring my heart out,
But looking at how you act,
Makes me think it'll be better without.

Another bridge or two,
Burnt by disagreement,
Another kiss or two,
Saved for different people.

I force my mind,
To draw a picture of you,
Drawn from my memory,
Your beauty is shown in truth.

Going down in my mind,
A vision so horrid,
Of you loving me,
But my heart is not yet solid.

Another bridge or two,
Burnt by disagreement,
Another kiss or two,
Saved for different people.
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Re: Pouring My Heart

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hell ya.
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Re: Pouring My Heart

Post by andriaSRH »

Nice.

I really like the part
Going down in my mind,
A vision so horrid,
Of you loving me,
But my heart is not yet solid.
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Re: Pouring My Heart

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thank you both!
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Re: Pouring My Heart

Post by weedguru_waffles »

I really like this. :) Keep it up man.
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Re: Pouring My Heart

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Thank you very much Waffles :)
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