just a lil scat..

[Grrrl]

been watching atmosphere and eyedea and a bunch of local mc's recently, I like the rythmic styles and rhyming patterns they used so I thought I'd have a rough dabble myself. have a beej:

21, my eyes are old,
I've seen tales that stay untold,
Nothing is without consequence,
Trying to make pounds from pence,
Sorting the cunts from the gents,
Balancing attack and defence,
Off the fence, into the war,
I won't let you close the door,
Reality left a message on answer phone,
"Hey man, when are you coming home?"

[Weedguru_Fire_Inside]

good for a random little piece. well, i liked it anyway

[doobieman420]

thats pretty neat, i liked the ending.