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To do with child abuse, ill let you decide what you make of it:

For every kid sat in fear,
for every kid thats shed a tear,
cos their dads had one to many beers tonight,
he's not known to fight,
but when he's pissed he just might,
bite and strike out, and its the kid that gets the clout,
and it takes the piss, that this sad excuse,
doesnt have the ability to seduce,
a real women so he resorts to miss-use of a child,
while her mum sits in the kitchen livin in denile,
allows this bitch ass punk to abuse her daughter,
she might aswell send her to mother fuckin slaughter,
And its all well and good that we frown on this clown
but whilst we're all un-happy he's still walking around
because the goverments claiming they just dont have the grounds
to go ahead and press charges,
tell that to the little girl when he barges in,
and shes way to thin and weak to fight back,
and she lacks a tele so the helplines wont reach her,
and shes way to ashamed to explain to her teacher,
that every time she goes home her step dad beats her!

Critics welcome :)
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Post by Weedguru_Fire_Inside »

haha, wonder who that is??

heard you spit it out before man. it's good shit.

keep postin.
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Aye man, i intend to post more new shit on here when i get the chance, but i thought id slap it up to get some reviews from people that aint heard it yet.
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upbeat
Thanks, any places you would improve or change?
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