my tears want to see Her...

[weedguru_animal]

first came the rage.
burning me inside and out,
i couldnt see through,
or hear through,
the gridlock of flames,
out of control,
on every street of my inner city...

This why brother John,
the wisest,
most honest man i know,
and love,
refuses to become involved,
refuses to let another female become entwined,
with his soul.

This is why brother John,
wants to die.
to escape the scum.
to forsake the sun,
to erase every thing in his life,
that he has ever felt, thought or done...

next has come the grief,
with no sign on the horizon,
of relief...

just more pain.
more trauma that wont be washed away by the rain.

uncontrollable crying,
caused by the most savage kind of lying,
the last soldier on the battle field,
screaming to the enemy
'wait, come back stab me again, im not dead yet, im just dying!!!'

Follow your heart,
i pronounce true and proud to the young,
well...
thats what i have done,
and look at me now:
messed up, knowing that 3 people would be dead,
if only i had access to a gun.

i dont want her to see my tears.
but my tears want to see her.

She has been blind to me when she pleases,
but suddenly she can see me,
she wants to be close...

but behind my watery world vision,
lies a part of me that is roaring at my heart:
'I WILL NOT ALLOW IT.
I WILL NOT BELIEVE HER.
I WILL NOT ALLOW YOU TO SHOW YOURSELF'
its a cold steel blade,
raising itself in my hand,
pointing towards....her.

[(weedguru)scarf]

emotional.. probably not the best you have posted but heartfelt none the less

[stoner_pacman]

I lovethis bit most
"uncontrollable crying,
caused by the most savage kind of lying,
the last soldier on the battle field,
screaming to the enemy
'wait, come back stab me again, im not dead yet, im just dying!!!"

It flows very well and would sound awesome in a good Hip Hop track, something along the lines of Sole or Sage Francis

[Weedguru_Fire_Inside]

I lovethis bit most
"uncontrollable crying,
caused by the most savage kind of lying,
the last soldier on the battle field,
screaming to the enemy
'wait, come back stab me again, im not dead yet, im just dying!!!"

It flows very well and would sound awesome in a good Hip Hop track, something along the lines of Sole or Sage Francis

someone once said "great minds think alike, but fools seldom differ."

whether we are fools or great minds, i do not know, but we are in agreement.

[Yoda]

class poem

[Weedguru_Fire_Inside]

yooooooo da? lol, yo yoda man, is that your actual location on the left? if so i may swing by for a j next time i head up your way.

[Yoda]

nah no way its bother with this account and this must be the wrong one... in in british northern irleand!