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Bubbles
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Lies.

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I see the look inside your eyes
you are surprised
a feeling i have never felt
an emotion i have only dealt

you say im wrong
i say "youre right!"
so you drop the fight
secrets i have
you are completely ignorant
it will happen fast
and only hurt for a moment

you say we excavate
but we all desecrate
so now i must consecrete
we will use cover
we will be discrete


when it happens
you will cry
you will die
to your surprise
its infront of your eyes


my first poem ive ever written, i think the only poem i will have ever written considering im not very good at metaphors lol
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Re: Lies.

Post by Regarded »

nice. very nice. I like how raw it is.
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Re: Lies.

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Regarded wrote:nice. very nice. I like how raw it is.
lol thanks, man.
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