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sanda
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Fresh from the forest
this summers crop
Comes a skunky green bud
with red hairs on top
Like a precios diamond
the crystals they shine
Hung and dried out slowly
like a delicate wine
Anticipation in the air
as the first joint is rolled
For good marijuana
is worth its weight in gold
First you hit it slowly
and put the taste to test
Then you pass it on
and hope for the best
A toke or two later
your appetite begins to stir
And before the joint is finished
your sights a little blurred
Eyes red and glossy
nerves made of steel
If you weren't so damn high
I know you'd be thrilled
Thank your lucky green thunb
that it didn't let you down
You'll definitely be stoned
as you're weighing out the pounds!
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Post by layabout guy »

Not my cup of tea (N)
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Post by Zen »

Well I'm not a fan of the rhyme scheme or the meter but the theme of the whole poem kicks ass :D

peace
Use the Earth to sew...
Use the Water to grow...
Use your hands to pick...
Your fingers to pack...
Use the Fire to burn...
Use the Air to breathe...
AND TOKE THAT SH!T LIKE A MUTHA FUCKIN' CYCLONE!!!

-Derekson
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Post by Caro »

I like it - I was listening to some beats and it flowed very nicely.
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Post by ~POTmirandaHEAD~ »

I had to make myself keep reading it... it was a lil boring.. but hey weed is weed.. keep it up :lol:
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Post by Dr. Greenthumb »

one of the best weed poems ive ever read
“Cannibalism? Racism? Dude, that’s not for us ... those decisions are better left to the suits in Washington. We’re just here to eat some dude!”
-Charlie Kelly
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